Funny
lol it was really quite funny, however a little short and a few more jokes would have been good.
Funny
lol it was really quite funny, however a little short and a few more jokes would have been good.
Alright, I'll remember that.
Great but...
The whole concept is great and you've got everything nailed, but the voice acting aswell as the quality of the roman just brings the whole animation dow in my opinion. I'd recommend a better microphone and possibly a better male voice-actor.
Good until
I quite liked it but felt it went downhill when the roman appeared. The voice acting was great, except again, the quality of the romans voice was poor and also slightly dissapointing that it was a poor attempt at a stereotypical southern american accent. However, I liked the style of animation, mixing crayon drawings with flash drawings and also liked the little interludes between scenes.
Potential
Had potential, but didn't quite get there
Invest time.
I understand what you tried to do, but I think you rushed it and got lazy. Spend more time on the drawing aswell as the concept. Remember flashes can take weeks, months or even years - a well thought-out flash with a lot of time invested will always give a final outcome which was worth the effort.
As i admitted below I did rush and I was just dying to put this up on newgrounds.
At least this made itself passed judgement, so it says that I have put a sustainable amount of effort in it.
Thanks
Eargasm
lol perfect reflection of todays sue culture. RATM have nothing on these guys.
Needs work
You've got some great animation but it's spoiled by a poor script, poor dialogue and lazy drawing in places. Feels rushed in this sense. However it's promising.
nice
lol gave me a laugh and I liked the constant angle changes
this was
BEST
FLASH
EVA
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