Problems
you have them
Problems
you have them
Smooth
Really nicely and smoothly animated. I'd like to see it a little better drawn though.
lol!
Ha, I thought it was great, animation was simple but didn't detract from the flash. Voice acting was good and script was funny. I think some of the 'jokes' could be honed a little more, but overall it was really good :D
Not funny
Not really funny, and trying to use 'n****r' as a random joke added to that lack of comical value.
Almost
I liked the simple animation/art style, aswell as the simple speech, just needs more to it.
I like it but
I really like the animation and art style, but it just seems like it's 30% of an animation that's not been finished, so can only really give 30% of a score.
Nearly
I think your voice acting, the quality of the voice recording as well as the fact that you sounded extremely camp, let it down. Along with the fact that it sounded like you tried to make it up on your feet instead of using a script. It nearly worked.
Expand
Could have worked if you expanded on the joke, but it failed to deliver overall.
Wut
Watched it twice and still didn't really get it. I think I know what you were trying do but it just didn't work.
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